WHY AM I NO MORE A KID?
Enters the world a neonate bawling in the infirmary
Who knows if he ends here
With a beatific smile reciting his summary
Circuiting the world, he had seen a lot
Well coddled childhood, amorous adolescence
a moment he desired, the other moment he got
Well coddled childhood, amorous adolescence
a moment he desired, the other moment he got
Hands the same, the toys have changed,
Insensate dolls once reflected a pristine smile of his face,
Intricate gadgets now make him win the race
Insensate dolls once reflected a pristine smile of his face,
Intricate gadgets now make him win the race
(A-Z) Deranged alphabets decimated his score,
Why was he made to cram?
No words now follow the order any more
Why was he made to cram?
No words now follow the order any more
Damsels kissed and played with his cheeks,
Such public show now raises the eye
Give enough reasons so that he freaks
Such public show now raises the eye
Give enough reasons so that he freaks
Boundaries were not confined
he was friends to all
Now in his miseries, he has no one to call
he was friends to all
Now in his miseries, he has no one to call
Once rolling over bed, he confidently fell and cried
In the twin site now, to save his face
he leaves no recipe untried
In the twin site now, to save his face
he leaves no recipe untried
Rushing with a bag on his back,
to the school on the hill
Time moved on, but the place is still,
Now beholds his son imitating the task
by no means he can conceal the thrill
to the school on the hill
Time moved on, but the place is still,
Now beholds his son imitating the task
by no means he can conceal the thrill
No one in his life, for whom he never did
If ever auctioned his efforts, highest is the bid
When looks the world so harsh, wish his deeds to rid
Ah! The life is never so beautiful,
as beautiful as when he was a kid.
If ever auctioned his efforts, highest is the bid
When looks the world so harsh, wish his deeds to rid
Ah! The life is never so beautiful,
as beautiful as when he was a kid.
bht sahi hai.. :) Keep the good work going :)
ReplyDeleteWelcome to blogosphere.
ReplyDeletePoem comes as a surprise, but well done nevertheless.
The layout of the poem is pretty good. Nice control.
I'd just like to point out one thing though.
Please avoid using SMS/Chat languages while blogging.
"d" for "the" for instance.
In all a nice start.
Keep posting.
thanks a lot poonam.Will surely continue :)
ReplyDelete@Gaurav: thanks for the candid analysis. Will definitely keep in mind for my subsequent posts.
ReplyDeletenice write up! and before i forget, welcome to blogosphere:)
ReplyDeletethnx dear :)
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